Let’s just get down to what I thought of the chapter, shall we?
1) That police officer reminds me of Mark from that other series.
2) I wonder what’s her name? The little girl’s, that is.
3) Not a bad panel/page there of showing the enemy’s appearance.
4) And I’m giving the hero a break for being young and wanting to be with someone. I don’t consider him a womanizer, though.
5) The chapter wasn’t bad at all. Still slow, but not bad.
One down, many more to go!